NS Information Report writing Wk 7

We are learning to write an information report about a topic related to space.

By Friday 5 June you need to have written and edited your information report on a topic related to space so that it is ready to be published.

Here are some ideas to write

• Jupiter
• Astronauts
• Earth    
• The Moon
• Eclipses
• Stars

My topic is:

Cygnus X-1

You need to attend one workshop with the teacher on an area that you feel you need help with for your writing. Here is the timetable where you will make your bookings. There is space for seven people in each workshop so book in quickly to make sure there is space!

Start researching and plan your writing here: (remember to write notes in your plan). Click here to see an exemplar of a plan.

Introduction:
Main idea: A supergiant star orbits the Cygnus X-1	More detail: The Cygnus X-1 was the first black hole discovered	More detail: The Cygnus X-1 was discovered in 1972 by Tom Bolton
Main idea: the cygnus X-1 supergiant star orbits it 5.6 days	More detail: the supergiant star is 25 to 30 times bigger.	More detail: the hole in Cygnus X-1 is 7 to 15 suns larger
Main idea: the Cygnus X-1 is located at sagittarius arm of the milky way	More detail: the type of black hole it is stellar mass black hole.	More detail: the cygnus X-1 is 8,200 light years.

Success Criteria for writing. Click here to see an exemplar of an information report about Mars.

Level 3	Student Targets:	Yes!
Audience and Purpose	Identify my audience and purpose for writing.
Content/Ideas	Write clearly and include all important information.
	Add factual detail to expand my ideas.
Structure: including punctuation and grammar	Use different sentence starters.
	Join some ideas using conjunctions such as: when, while, after, since, until, if, because, although, that
	Organise my ideas into paragraphs and sequence my ideas so that my writing flows.
	Use subheadings for each new paragraph to tell the reader what it is about
	Check that I am writing in the present tense (for example: the sun is a ball of fire; the stars are shooting through the sky)
	Use a range of punctuation correctly.    (.,?!)
Editing	Identify and correct most spelling errors.
	Improve my writing so that it is more enjoyable/informative for the reader.

Start your writing here:

Introduction

Have you ever wondered of a black hole that is famous? if so the Cygnus X-1 information report is for you!

Orbit

The Cygnus X-1 orbits a supergiant star the star is 25 to 30 times bigger than the sun. It has been found in 1972 by Tom Bolton.

Large

Cygnus X-1 is a black hole in it hole it is 7 to 15 sun’s large.The black hole get gases from the supergiant star and the gases feed the Cygnus X-1.

location

The Cygnus X-1 is located at sagittarius arm of the milky way.

info

The star group it is in is Cygnus, the swan. It orgin of it’s name is First X-ray source found in Cygnus.The is no light in a black hole so a supergiant star give heaps of light so anything can see.

Blackhole

A black hole like Cygnus X-1 can crush heaps of sun’s.The sizes of the black hole are three different one is normal-size star, stellar-mass black hole and Supermassive black hole.

Falling into a black hole

Earth could orbit a black hole beyond at the event horizon.Get a bit closer and gravity from earth’s one side is going to be stretched and will be ripped apart.

Dimeter

The diameter from the black hole to the supergiant star is 20 to 40 miles (30 to 60 km).